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Approved Character Yggt'her Jozarin

Just so you know...

Task Force Lantern is marked as full, while the Eucharis is supposedly only accepting a Medic, Scientist or Clerk. If you are interested in the latter on a plot level, then you would probably have to tweak your character. If you have no particular reservations, however, the Sakura II still has a marked infantry spot available so that, at least, is perfectly fine.
 
Two years of training during wartime? Does not make sense. Those two years were during a time when Yamatai was screaming for all hands on deck and sorely in need of more troops. Hell, the battle above their capital was only won by the intervention of time traveling troops from the past. I'm still trying to work that one out.

There's also no real "class" society. It's basically the important clans and everyone else. Money is not quite so important in Yamatai as it is in other nations.

The description of her physical skill makes little sense. Most people use that to show what kinds of physical capabilities the character has or what physical activities they routinely practice. As it is, it seems a bit of a waste.
 
Yonto-hei is more like a temporary position; for example, a new recruit would be a Yonto-hei. Or if you've been demoted from Santo-hei for some reason. Yonto-hei would not be asked to serve as "special ops" because they either haven't finished training or they've got some kind of black mark on their record.

It would be helpful if you jumped onto the IRC and asked someone there to help you craft this.
 
I've sent Gallant a PM to look at your character to see if he can fit you in the Task Force Lantern plot.
 
Do you have a Skype account? If you do, I'd rather talk to you there, or in the IRC. Just PM it to me and we'll get started.

I've looked over your character sheet and I don't mind accepting you into TFL, but I have to figure out how to introduce you and where you'd like to fit into it.
 
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