Approved Character [YSS Aeon] Arete Surinus

[Arbitrated]

Well we know the drill by now I think.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:arete_surinus This is dat gurl!

@Ethereal (I think) needs to give permission for the relation with Mr. Sif.

@Nashoba is dat GM!

@Ametheliana is just cool and such and also is really helpful with ironing out random bits to make things go super smooth-like.

@FrostJaeger is Frost, he's the FM of Elysia and all that : P

 

[Ethereal]

Yassssssss!

 

[Ametheliana]

You could always link SAoY training.

Couldn't there have been some kind of terrible event that made her want to get off the streets and that's why she joined rather than one day just deciding out of nowhere? Something happens in front of her sort of thing?

Ty also.

 

[Nashoba]

I see no issue with this Character.

 

[Nashoba]

Orders have been posted, commence posting in the plot.

 

[FrostJaeger]

@Arbitrated - here's my review of Arete Surinus.

• For the Skills Learned section, would you mind making the skill areas into proper sub-headers, please?
• For the Social Connections section, would you mind adding the ages of Arete's parents, please?

Given how minor the above requests are, as the Faction Manager of Elysia I'm going to go ahead and APPROVE Arete Surinus for usage within the roleplay.

 

[Arbitrated]

I'm curious, actually-why do you like having the skills as subheaders so much? o .o you ask that a lot.



The age of her parents seems... oddly specific as far as details go.

 

[FrostJaeger]

I'm curious, actually-why do you like having the skills as subheaders so much? o .o you ask that a lot.

It's easier to reference due to the headers appearing in the table of contents - and in my personal opinion it looks far more orderly.

The age of her parents seems... oddly specific as far as details go.

Now that I think about it, yeah - my bad.