Approved Character (YSS Heartbreaker) Kinzuko no Byakko (Project Designation)

[ArsenicJohn]

Link: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:kinzuku_no_byakko
GM: @Reynolds

Need a second opinion on the tech side of things. Reynolds is handling the story aspect, I just want to be sure the tech fits. His name will change in the plot. Hopefully, someone will give him a nickname. I have no intention of using him anywhere other than Heartbreaker or making any more androids like him.

 

[ArsenicJohn]

@Aendri Would you mind taking a look at this?

 

[Reynolds]

Yeah, I'm pretty happy with the story and character elements, I just need someone more technical minded to take a look and make sure everything is kosher.

 

[ArsenicJohn]

@Wes What do you think?

 

[Wes]

I feel like there's no way Uesu's fleet would replace its Nekovalkyrja. They're his invention!

 

[ArsenicJohn]

Well.. that's actually not a problem because with Reynolds plan.. it will end up not being created by Uesu but instead another species off in that direction.

 

[Wes]

Proceed.

 

[ArsenicJohn]

@Reynolds Okay, so I think I dealt with everything you wanted and the things mentioned by Doshii Jun. Does this mean I'm approved now?

 

[Reynolds]

Looks good to me, sorry for the delay. I made the last few edits to your page to get it ready. This is APPROVED if @Wes can move it for me.