Seems like the height/weight were fixed already. I understand the personality section, personally, but there are definitely a few typos. You might want to just reread it and clear up the grammar a bit. If you get that cleared up to where Aendri approves, I think it would be good enough for me.
Wasn't sure what all official say I had on this, Wes, since I don't have those tags/badges that say Approver or GM. I thought I was just in charge of accepting or denying them into the specific plot. All new to me, so thanks for clearing it up.