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Approved Character [YSS Heartbreaker] Ylva Ōkami

Okay, mostly looks good, but let me go over a few things.

  • All measurements need to be in both formats. cm/inches, kg/lbs, etc.
  • Add a tag to the top box next to DoB for her Age, so that can be easily referenced.
  • We use the Mindy 3 on the Heartbreaker, so go ahead and tag that in your Inventory. I also have the crew keep a section on their page, or a separate page they link to, with the loadout for their PA. Helps keep track of things. You can wait and do this once you're using your PA, but wanted to mention it now. Examples: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=stararmy:yss_heartbreaker#vehicles_and_inventory
In addition, I swapped the friendly doctor's names around. That way it's still a reference, without being a straight usage of a real person. Hope that's okay?
 
Alright, everything looks good, so I'll mark this one APPROVED! If @Wes or anyone else can move it to the proper section, that would be great. The new mission will go up this weekend, but feel free to post in the OOC thread until then.
 
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