Approved Character [YSS Kaiyō] Johnathan Septine, SAINTS Intellegence operative

[BMan142]

Hi all,
This is my character submission for @amethelina ‘s YSS Kaiyō campaign. I created Johnanthan through the wiki, so I’ll just submit a link to the article. I currently don’t have a profile, I’ll be talking to some artist friends for a commission.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:character:johnathan_septine

Thanks all,

BMan142

 

[Ametheliana]

I'd like you to look around and make sure you don't have any random capitalizations (Tall, Graduating, maybe some others I missed?)

"he has a nasty habit if telling..." (Should be "He has a nasty habit of...")

"his speaks very shortly and sharply..." (Should be "He speaks...")

He would have joined/enlisted in SAoY at 20.

Link the Fourth Elysian War like this:

[[faction:elysia:history:fourth_elysian_war]]

All other links should be like that, which is the last bit of the URL with double brackets around it.

Link Vicky, Geshrinopolis, as well as Star Army common skills in the skills section.

Great dude!! I love having this kind of character around! Very cool!

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved