Burgmond45
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Approved Character [YSS Kaiyo] Walter Hyde
- Thread starter Burgmond45
- Start date
Going to tag @Wes
His species would be "Geshrin". Just use the same link you used in history for his parents up at the top table instead of "man".
Include a little about how basic went.
Link things like [[calendar:ye_38]] and [[planet:yamatai]].
You're only allowed seven skills to begin with and SAoY skills count as four. So knock one off.
His species would be "Geshrin". Just use the same link you used in history for his parents up at the top table instead of "man".
Include a little about how basic went.
Link things like [[calendar:ye_38]] and [[planet:yamatai]].
You're only allowed seven skills to begin with and SAoY skills count as four. So knock one off.
The wording of the plague might benefit from some tweaking because it makes it sound like it is still happening. In actuality it wiped itself out as designed on the day it activated and killed everyone who had silently acquired it.
Burgmond45
Inactive Member
Alrighty, I think I can do all that. Honestly while the plague wasn't the easiest thing to understand, what really threw me for the loop was the concept of upgrading civilians in general. I didn't grasp the extent of it, whether or not I can have all of that happen 'off-set', or what it really means.
Granted, I worked on this guy from 3 in the afternoon to 1 in the morning. Guess I wasn't all in there... Whoops.
Burgmond45
Inactive Member
@Ametheliana I have made my edits to the wiki page. Is there anything else that needs fixing, or did I fix it good?
Hey don't think this wasn't a fine example of a character to begin with, you did great! Go ahead and hop into the current briefing thread and direct any questions you may have to me or the community you already are a part of on discord!
Approved
Approved
Burgmond45
Inactive Member
@Wes
If it is alright by you, I'd wish to change Walter Hyde from a Geshrin to a Minkan. I originally wanted him to be the latter, but I got mixed up with details pertaining to upgrading Yamataians, and thus had be a Geshrin. However, I understand my mistake, and I wish to correct it. It wouldn't break the canon of the roleplay I am in, since my first two posts never specified what he is, only that his name is Walter Hyde, and that he is a engineer that is pretty new to how things work.
If not, then that is alright, since the conversion can happen later. Although I'd like the redo because of preferences, and the fact I had to reluctantly remove details from Walter's wiki page that I liked. I hope this isn't too much to ask!
If it is alright by you, I'd wish to change Walter Hyde from a Geshrin to a Minkan. I originally wanted him to be the latter, but I got mixed up with details pertaining to upgrading Yamataians, and thus had be a Geshrin. However, I understand my mistake, and I wish to correct it. It wouldn't break the canon of the roleplay I am in, since my first two posts never specified what he is, only that his name is Walter Hyde, and that he is a engineer that is pretty new to how things work.
If not, then that is alright, since the conversion can happen later. Although I'd like the redo because of preferences, and the fact I had to reluctantly remove details from Walter's wiki page that I liked. I hope this isn't too much to ask!
Heya just popping in to say I am A-OK with this. It wouldn't mess anything up that we have going and whatnot. The change has my stamp on it.
Go ahead and edit the page and post in here when you have and what edits you made, Burgmond.
Burgmond45
Inactive Member
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:walter_hyde
I have my edits to the wiki; the main change was changing the race of Walter Hyde from Geshrin to Minkan, although I did re-add a small detail back into his History section on the Wiki, which is simply this: "Following the Plague, Edward Hyde was punctual with keeping the family up-to-date with body types; the family the first among of tens of thousands to obtain a Minkan body of their own."
Edward, just to be clear, is Walter's father.
I have my edits to the wiki; the main change was changing the race of Walter Hyde from Geshrin to Minkan, although I did re-add a small detail back into his History section on the Wiki, which is simply this: "Following the Plague, Edward Hyde was punctual with keeping the family up-to-date with body types; the family the first among of tens of thousands to obtain a Minkan body of their own."
Edward, just to be clear, is Walter's father.
It should have the word was in there such as, "...the family was the first..."
Burgmond45
Inactive Member
... I'm just going to quickly fix that before anyone else notices and makes fun of my broken English. XD
You're all good.
Changes are approved!
Changes are approved!
