Approved Character [YSS Soyokaze] Shanota Omoorai

[SirSPT]

Character Article URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:shanota_omoorai
Preferred Plot's GM: @Yoshi

This should work? Maybe? Need some help with wingman part.

 

[Yoshi]

like what I see so far, few minor issues with the character page that I see. Once I get to my pc today I'll give you the list of fixes. Not bad at all and the list will be short.As for wingmen I'll use the neko generator for them and build npc pages over the next few days for them, I'll be in exile with little to do anyways.

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[Yoshi]

O-Tay here we go, PC acting funny today but I think I beat it enough to keep it going

1. The physical descriptions need to be complete sentences. If you need an example please look at Misato Suzume, or Yoshi Katai, I built them myself and they were approved by GMS far better then I.

2.Distinguishing Features, Does your character have any? Any genetic tattoos? Freckles? Any cute moles on her? Anything that would make her different in looks then her lab sisters?

3.Her rank, She will be the wing commander for her wingmen, She'd need to be at least a Nito Hei

Past that she looks good and like I said before I'll work on her wingmates. and then you can take them over or have me run them or any combination you would like.

 

[SirSPT]

Alrighty then, edited everything you pointed out.

 

[Yoshi]

Contact me via a conversation to discuss you getting in and setting up a time for a JP for him to meet the Captain and her wingmen. Also please go ahead and introduce yourself on the Soyo's OOC thread and say hi to the rest of the gang. Welcome aboard.