Approved Character [YSS Wyvern] Dion Rothart

[Pancakei]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:character:dion

@Ethereal

@FrostJaeger I think I already got your approval but if you want to take another look over it could help.

 

[Ethereal]

Once Frost gives the thumbs up, looks all good to me ^^

Approved

 

[Pancakei]

.... Wrong forum? XD

It's not an adoption.

 

[FrostJaeger]

@Pancakei - here's my (belated >.<) review of Dion Rothart.

• For the History section, would you mind adding more internal wiki links, please?
• For the Social Connections section:
  • Would you mind naming Dion's immediate family members and listing their ages and relationship (mother, father, etc.) with him, please?
  • Did Dion make any friends and/or enemies while serving as a security guard? If so, would you mind adding their names and species, please?
• For the Inventory & Finance section, would you list how much KS Dion currently has, please?

Besides that, your "adoption status" appears to be in good standing, sir.

 

[Pancakei]

I edited the page with about everything except enemies and such. That is something I am going to have to put more thought into while building up other things.

 

[FrostJaeger]

Having looked over the aforementioned edits, as the Faction Manager of Elysia I hereby APPROVE Dion Rothart for usage within the roleplay.

Those rabbits better start running.

 

[Ametheliana]

@Kim can the title tag get changed from Approved Adoption?

 

[Kim]

Yup.