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Approved Character [YSS Wyvern] Dion Rothart

@Pancakei - here's my (belated >.<) review of Dion Rothart.
  • For the History section, would you mind adding more internal wiki links, please?
  • For the Social Connections section:
    • Would you mind naming Dion's immediate family members and listing their ages and relationship (mother, father, etc.) with him, please?
    • Did Dion make any friends and/or enemies while serving as a security guard? If so, would you mind adding their names and species, please?
  • For the Inventory & Finance section, would you list how much KS Dion currently has, please?

Besides that, your "adoption status" appears to be in good standing, sir.
 
I edited the page with about everything except enemies and such. That is something I am going to have to put more thought into while building up other things.
 
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