Approved Character Zaheera

[Gamerofthegame]

Yar, Taco is dragging me in the deep too.

And... I believe this is the first Helashio that gets a real Bio. :lol:

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:zaheera

Not to pleased with all of it, but I personally find it adequte.

Requires Jaqueline's hand at it and the Lorath peeps laser beams of approval.

 

[DocTomoe]

The Taco--- erm, Tomoe, finds this character to be acceptableish, I'd like Tiff and Doshii to take a look as well.

Taco Taco Stamp Of Taco

 

[Doshii Jun]

Helashio, especially the ones who did not have their memories tampered with, always trained a little for a possible rebellion.

Is that really supported by Doc and Tiff? If so, no other problems with this bio. Though I really wish you used fewer words to describe something, Gamer.

 

[Gamerofthegame]

I was in a showy mood. :lol:


Had to assume these things being that they tamper with memories and such to not have a revolution...

 

[DocTomoe]

Doshii, I approve. That right there is the exact reason why their memories got tampered with. They did things, like learning. Learning to read, write, communicate, fashion tools, learn self awareness and defense, etc etc.

Gamer got it good.