I agree with Thomas and Zack (who didn't see that coming?). As one of the first Lorath characters, I can understand that some concessions must be made. Typically the first characters of a race are in higher positions than normal, or are more powerful or intelligent. This character seems a bit too extreme though.
A position like this character has really should be achieved through RP. I'd think the best thing for the head of the psionics house would be an NPC at this point, possibly to be replaced later by a PC. If you're set on it though, I can't stop you.
PC can mean player character or power character. Both definitions seem to apply to this character. I think it needs a bit of toning down. So, without further ado, here's what I'd like to see done.
You should probably do at least one of these: lessen the character's intelligence (he can still be smart, even an inventor, just not a human--er, Lorath--computer), lessen his strength and physical augmentations, and/or have him either right below the leader of the psionic house, or just taking over and thus still a little green.
Basically you need to make him less intelligent, less powerful, and/or less experienced. As it is now, your character has a bit too much of each quality. In fact, with all those qualities, there wouldn't be too much of a point to RPing him: if there's nowhere for him to progress, it might as well be an NPC. You can always reduce one of the qualities now, and work on it IC later. Normally I'd say that any changes I suggested were completely optional, but really, something has to give. I'd like to see you reduce all three areas, but if you only reduced one, I'd understand and be cool with it.
It was however, a nice effort, and perfectly fine except for being a bit over-powered. Good luck in changing it, and even if you don't, I hope you have fun playing it.
