Don't worry, I'm more frustrated with Arieg than with with you Cadet, you were just trying to do the right thing.
Anyway, I was not in the mood for Arieg's games so I went and fixed the formatting myself and the article is now
approved.
This review is for: Sesestra Alpha
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=system:sesestra_alpha
The submitted article is/has…
[X] A very high level of overall quality
[X] A general topic sentence under the title header
[X] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[X] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[X] In the proper format/template
[X] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[X] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[X] Wikified (terms that
could be a link
should be a link)
[X] No red and/or broken links
[X] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[X] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[X] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[X] Obtusely redundant
[X] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[X] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[X] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[X] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[X] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[X] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[X] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[X] Lacking Detail
[X] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[NA] Speeds in compliance with the
Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[NA] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the
DR Guidelines
[NA] The
in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[NA] The
Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
APPROVED