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Approved Character [188604] Jason Argo

I think I'm pretty happy with this, but let me confer with my team.

I think I also need to speak with some people regarding SSI, since that is still waiting on approval.
 
How do you feel about dropping the MODUS and the IPG-look-alike cybernetics package?

I think we're all a bit worried that the tech is a bit much and a bit technobabbly.

We also need to square up Jason and Alex's character bios. Meaning he should have about the same level of enhancements as Alex.
 
Zack said:
How do you feel about dropping the MODUS and the IPG-look-alike cybernetics package?

I think we're all a bit worried that the tech is a bit much and a bit technobabbly.

We also need to square up Jason and Alex's character bios. Meaning he should have about the same level of enhancements as Alex.
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For some reason I didn't get an alert last night despite this thread being on my watched threads list, or maybe somehow I overlooked it, but you gave me the the details of what you wanted on chat. I apologise.

I fine with dropping both of those. Looking over Alex's app, here are the changes I came up with. Here ae my proposed changes


Physical would be replaced with

""Jason, much like the rest of SSI has been through a grueling physical regimen that pushed their bodiy to the limit. They possess tstanima on par with a infantryman before the advent of power armor, razor sharp reflexes, an incredible ability to ignore pain compared to the average person, and thanks cybernetic augmentations posesses a running speeding topping out at 40 KPH and lifting strenght 1.5 times his body weight."

and cybernetics would be replaced with

"Aside from the [[nepleslia:nepleslian_mindware]] implanted to given him inbuilt communications, higher learning capacity, better handling of machines even at a distance, and making it easier to control him he's also been inplanted with similar physical enhancements to strength and speed. "

You okayed the mindware on chat (Link: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=nepleslia:nepleslian_mindware all though since it's just a copy of the freespacer version for neplesians this might be more useful https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=freespacers:mindware to look at) but I took out the nanocor, the pepper cybernetic eyes, and the prosthetic limbs since while you didn't expressly tell me to remove them Alex doesn't really have any compartive augmentations.

Tell me what you think.
 
At Dumont's suggestion, I'm going to change the proposed change of the physical too

"Jason, much like the rest of SSI has been through a grueling physical regimen that pushed their bodies to the limit. They possess stamina on par with a infantryman before the advent of power armor, razor sharp reflexes, an incredible ability to ignore pain compared to the average person, and thanks cybernetic augmentations possesses a superhuman speed and strength."

She thought it would be better if I kept the section vague for narrative purposes rather than giving concrete numbers.
 
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