This review is for: Sesestran Sub Culture with URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:sesestran_culture
The submitted article is/has…
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] A very high level of overall quality
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] A general topic sentence under the title header
[N/A] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Needed and/or useful to the setting
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] In the proper format/template
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] No red and/or broken links
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not…
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Obtusely redundant
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
[NO] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[◎[ ‿ ]◎] Lacking Detail
[N/A] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has…
[N/A] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[N/A] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[N/A] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[N/A] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.
To the submitter: Is this a refit or overhaul of a previous article? If yes, provide a link and a list of changes.
Notes:
Figure out this not a faction is a faction that contributed to the culture and then we can go from there. If it's not a faction and retconned then how is it contributing to the culture of the Pact?
I intend to finish this review by: Oct 8, 2017