Approved Submission [IIS] Iemochi Lifestyle

[Ethereal]

Submission Type: Subsidiary
Template Used: Company
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:iis:lifestyle
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:iis:lifestyle

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? No
Faction requires art? No

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No

Notes:
A subsidiary of the IIS brand, dealing in everyday products such as toothpaste, industrial lubricant and such items.

 

[META_mahn]

*nab*

 

[CadetNewb]

If it's ok with you @META_mahn , I'll take over this review.

So far, the article looks good, but since there's no actual products yet, you should either remove it, or make a simple bullet list with the items. Additionally, I think you need to have @Wes permission to make this there.

 

[Ethereal]

Sure, thanks for your reply Cadet

I'll pop some products in the description and wait for Wes to give it a nod ^^

 

[META_mahn]

Sure, take it over. Not much to say anyways besides what you've mentioned.

 

[Arbitrated]

If all we're waiting for is FM approval, then would @Wes please come here so we may have the FM review?

 

[Wes]

Why isn't this in WIP?

 

[Ethereal]

Darn, it must have got caught up when I restructured the IIS articles. Will change now.

 

[Wes]

I'd like you to remove all forced line breaks from the article because they violate the wiki style guidelines.

Also: Yamataians despise chewing gum, it's offensive for a Yamataian company to make it.

 

[Ethereal]

You got it

Replaced line breaks with bullet points.
Removed chewing gun.
Changed namespace.

 

[Wes]

FM approved.

 

[Arbitrated]

Yamataians despise chewing gum

This is... oddly specific and yet I'm laughing xD I've got to ask, why?

 

[CadetNewb]

If I had to guess, it's because Yamataians are most familiar with how Nepleslians eat it - spitting it on the ground after they're done.

 

[CadetNewb]

APPROVED