Approved Submission Thunderer Heavy Rifle

[Commissar Farzi]

Submission RP Example

https://stararmy.com/roleplay-forum/threads/iron-and-blood-reactivated.68731/

Submission URL

https://stararmy.com/wiki/doku.php?id=:corp:iron_company:weapon:thunderer_heavy_rifle

List Any Unapproved Sub-Articles

Thunderer Ammo on Star Army Space Roleplay

stararmy.com

Submission Faction(s)

1. Outlaws (Independent)

Submission Terms

1. I agree

For those uncomfortable moments when you absolutely have to kill the uglies; accept no substitute.

 

[Wes]

Possible Quality Problems Identified (Ammo page)​

After analyzing the page structure, a few possible problems about the readability and usability of the page were identified. Please have a look at the points below and see if you can correct them. Keep in mind that this was an automatic analysis - you need to judge yourself if it is correct.

Incorrectly Nested Sections​

The page contains sections that skip section levels. This hinders readability and structure. A section should only directly contain the next subsection levels. Consider adding missing sub section headlines or move up your existing sub sections to the correct level.

Two OOC Sections​

Please merge OOC sections into on.

 

[Andrew]

Possible Quality Problems Identified (Ammo page)​

After analyzing the page structure, a few possible problems about the readability and usability of the page were identified. Please have a look at the points below and see if you can correct them. Keep in mind that this was an automatic analysis - you need to judge yourself if it is correct.

Incorrectly Nested Sections​

The page contains sections that skip section levels. This hinders readability and structure. A section should only directly contain the next subsection levels. Consider adding missing sub section headlines or move up your existing sub sections to the correct level.

Two OOC Sections​

Please merge OOC sections into on.

Done

 

[Commissar Farzi]

Went and removed the OOC note-not sure how to make the ammo section more readable though.

 

[Andrew]

Went and removed the OOC note-not sure how to make the ammo section more readable though.

I fixed the Nesting

 

[Commissar Farzi]

Thanks hoss.

 

[Jack Pine]

Oh hey, a rifle I modeled

 

[Wes]

I approve the rifle but not the ammo, we need to figure out the DR situation with that first.

 

[Commissar Farzi]

Cool-big guns are incoming!

Not sure how to balance the ammo though hoss-any suggestions?

 

[Wes]

I guess the issue is the DRs should probably not include the "after effects" for the number, just the initial hit, if that makes sense.

 

[Commissar Farzi]

Yep, makes sense to me too, I'll get on it when I get home.

Edit: Should be good to go now.