I made some edits, look them over. I want to gently express how articles need a bit more wiki linking and attention to detail. For instance, we settled on chondrex, but the article still said silk and yamataium in a few places. Also, you didn't link chondrex but just put it in unlinked. Things like that I want you to get in the habit of doing. You're very creative and have a lot more to share with us, but it will be easier to do so if your contributions are the best representations of themselves that they can be.
Now, nothing is telling me this should be tier 8. Stick to tier 5 or below imo.