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Iemochi Integrated Systems

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Submission Type: Corporation
Submission URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:iemochi_integrated_systems

Faction: Independent (working with Yamatai, Nepleslia, USO)
FM Approved Yet? Several nods in VC and PMs but I think I need official approval
Faction requires art? No idea.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles?
Yes
Edit: now added them into the main article, took a long time.

Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No
Notes:

*wipes brow*

Alright, here it is. This company provides intricate, hard-to-produce internals for shipyards and other manufacturers that are hard to make economically on a large scale (due to patents, expertise, facilities, time). This includes Yamatai's Ketsurui products as well as civilian ones. They recently moved into the Nepleslian market by warping their home starport into orbit around Fortuna. RP will come soon regarding them also moving into the USO's market.

I feel like I'm missing a few things but I thought I'd best submit it before I end up making things way too elaborate. @Wes, @Gunhand4171 , @Ametheliana and @Zack have pitched in at one point or another though I need official approval in this thread from a few of them. Thanks for the numerous others that helped me in VC and PMs :3
 
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Can you link all unapproved subarticles?

Perhaps the form could be used too?
 
Done, though I'm not sure whether to list all the NPCs I made as fluff (there's a whole family that run the company) so I left them out of the unapproved subarticles
 
You don't need to list every NPC, but you should list the important ones (or at least give them a name). Just remember to keep things up to date and add in NPCs if you use them in RP.

So long as Wes is cool with the space stations being in Yamatai territory I've got no problem with this.

Also, I changed the products to be a bullet'd list for readability.
 
Making companies that have been around so long has not worked out in the past. What makes this company different?
 
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I can't speak for the other companies people have made because I haven't looked into them but this company is planned to be used in USO's plotline, if you're wondering about usage. In addition, the company is part of a greater interlinking of some narratives I've been working on (character histories, future tech subs, possible future plotlines).
 
Effectively this makes them the largest and most influential independent organisation contracted by the Yamatai Star Empire that isn't directly controlled by them such as the Ketsurui Clan. As such, the name of Iemochi is generally well known inside the Star Army of Yamatai.
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I think we need some clarification as to why or how the company has so much status, reputation, prestige, and resources, despite not being seen or mentioned in the roleplay up until now.

Just to clarify, it has a production yard in the Uesureyan Fields, which is the largest starport on Yamatai and I'm assuming a location where a lot of pre-established roleplay has occurred. It also has a maintenance yard and stockpiling station around Hanako's Star, which I'm assuming also has a lot of pre-established roleplay.

There are also some facilities on or around 188604, Freehold Factory, Gashmere, and, Fortuna, which may or may not require the approval of their specific FMs.

The company headquarters are situated in the heart of Kyoto, Yamatai, currently run by Iemochi Chiyo, eldest daughter of the Founder. The building resembles a 12-pointed star, each wing of the facility extending out from the central tower. Vertically, the central tower is around 200 floors high, the wings which extend out sloping down in a stepwise manner until at the extremes of the wings there are the 3-floor high employee entrances. Aesthetically, the building represents a citadel, almost a military fortress. The tones are mostly reinforced glass, the external smooth metal panels being white and light grey.
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The headquarters themselves are quite distinctive too. I think that a building with this sort of architectural style would be noticeable and conspicuous within the Kyoto skyline.
 
The IIS has been mentioned in the RP since the establishment of the Kaiyo plot, it's influence has been pointed out numerous times across that plot and has been quoted as the reason for a lot of character development events of my characters. Some such events have affected other characters in such a way their characters have directly developed because of this company's influence.

Recently, I've built a interlinking between several characters of mine and others that revolves around this company so I believe I can count that as established RP also. I can quote and point you in the direction of some of these pre-established roleplays if you wish.

I have express clearance from the FMs of Yamatai ( @Wes ), USO (@Zack ) and Nepleslia (@Gunhand4171 ) for those stations so they're all legal and I'm sure if you check that ex-Freespacer world (dead and uninhabited) is not in Freespacer territory hence I don't believe I need Polygon's approval per se but I'll tag him if needed.

You've pointed out the headquarters and while it may stand out, it is meant to be flamboyant. I've changed the height of the building to be more inline with the rest of the skyline as you rightly pointed out - (apparently the tallest building is only 50-something stories tall go figure).

I hope this is informative.
 
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With competition quickly falling under its growing success by buyouts or more militant excursions, selling to the Star Army of Yamatai all the while. (Not a complete sent.)

It needs to be started some time between YE 35-39.
 
The first portion of the first sentence still says 15.
 
It should be current YE according to some people.

Also can all of these subarticles be contained in the article itself? I can show examples of company articles that list and describe their facilities in the article. Most of these are stubs.
 
Just wondering how would that make sense for their size and how they've been mentioned in past RP?

I've moved all the sub-articles into the main article despite it makes things more messy as you required.

The locations should contain all the information needed for the article to be approved, class, location, purpose etc. so if you think they're stubs please give me some elaboration to work with.
 
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