Iemochi Integrated Systems

[Ethereal]

Submission Type: Corporation
Submission URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:corp:iemochi_integrated_systems

Faction: Independent (working with Yamatai, Nepleslia, USO)
FM Approved Yet? Several nods in VC and PMs but I think I need official approval
Faction requires art? No idea.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles?
Yes
Edit: now added them into the main article, took a long time.

Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? No
Notes:

*wipes brow*

Alright, here it is. This company provides intricate, hard-to-produce internals for shipyards and other manufacturers that are hard to make economically on a large scale (due to patents, expertise, facilities, time). This includes Yamatai's Ketsurui products as well as civilian ones. They recently moved into the Nepleslian market by warping their home starport into orbit around Fortuna. RP will come soon regarding them also moving into the USO's market.

I feel like I'm missing a few things but I thought I'd best submit it before I end up making things way too elaborate. @Wes, @Gunhand4171 , @Ametheliana and @Zack have pitched in at one point or another though I need official approval in this thread from a few of them. Thanks for the numerous others that helped me in VC and PMs :3

 

[Ethereal]

If you could do it here I'd appreciate it, VC tends to get off track / fuzzy so it'd be better to have the reasons written down for the record

 

[Ametheliana]

Just wondering how would that make sense for their size and how they've been mentioned in past RP?

They shouldn't be that big and mentioning setting elements in past RP only soft canons them they're not hard canon until they're approved they aren't hard canon. That's not even my opinion that's Wes' view.

I've moved all the sub-articles into the main article despite it makes things more messy as you required.

The locations should contain all the information needed for the article to be approved, class, location, purpose etc. so if you think they're stubs please give me some elaboration to work with.

I'm telling you right now they don't. This is the type of thing we can VC about but I don't have time to tell you how to make a one paragraph page into a multiple header-utilizing page but that's what I'm looking for. Something that basically warrants a ToC. That's what I will need in the future rather than a stub article. Let me read through the locations... Good.

I don't think the article should say:
"...the company's status grew to the point almost every space station built with bought components has an Iemochi product inside it..."

 

[Ethereal]

Thanks for all your help reviewing, Ame.

I'm gonna call this here, though if another NTSE could give this a look at some point that might give me the energy to kickstart again.

Seems there's just more and more issues being brought to light as we go on that weren't stated in the initial review, so I don't fancy chasing the white rabbit - my IRL life isn't exactly helping with motivation to do so.

Can't RP with them until they're approved, can't approve them because there's not enough RP behind them, as you say - seems like a catch 22 to me.

Thanks anyway, let this sub rot here, I don't have the motivation to see it through. Sorry @Zack looks like Section 6 won't be getting it's research partner after all.

 

[Ametheliana]

Sorry about that, @Ethereal