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Approved Submission [NDC] Flora and Fauna

Charaa

Charaa

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Puraliberry Juice on Star Army Space Roleplay

Brief description of the food item/ration Manufacturer: Black Wing Enterprises Price: 5DS History After a stint as a ‘damsel in distress and being rescued by Zeke Rykiel. Ayla Knight had spent her time on extended rest. Nearly a lot of this time was spent with Zeke, who had taught her a thing...
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Tevoo Flower on Star Army Space Roleplay

Tevo is a Flower found in dark places in New Dusk Conclave territory. This plage is listed on the Flora and Fauna page. Appearence Tevoo is a midnight sky blue flower, which resembled the Terran Dahlia flower but with a more Star shaped appearance. There were white spots that dot throughout the...
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  1. NDC
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  1. I agree
Alright, next on my list to submit is the Flora and Fauna page. This page includes a creature, as well as flora that Madi had mentioned to me once, as well as the Caerbannog that Whisper created. Mainly those that were naturally found on the worlds as well as those imported to the NDC or perhaps cloned. I also created a drink after one of the fruit, and a special flower. I thought that both should be added to the submission.
 
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As an NDC FM I've got some readability concerns that I would like to see addressed before I give an approval, Charaa has said that they're willing to work on that to one degree or another, so I'm going to wait on that. Don't let that hold up the actual review though.
 
This is a 'cultural' article, so the review is almost entirely about readability in the first place. So I would prefer you guys give it a once over and get it formatted and worded the way you want, and then I'll review that so that we can minimize and streamline the corrections.
 
I read this and upvoted.
 
Hey guys this has been sitting for a while, what is going on with it? @Charaa
 
I'm still waiting on people, unfortunately, with limited access to a computer, it has been taking a lot longer.
 
Sorry for the long wait on this one! I've gone through and made adjustments for readability. Feel free to give it a look now, @Andrew . Thanks!
 
Alright, going through it right now
 
I like the fact some fauna and flora are being fleshed out. The only thing that could make it better is some art. You folks could always check in with @KoreHytaria she might see something there she could put some creativity to.

Either way, this is approved. - I hope this article evolves over time; always new stuff to discover!

Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...

[ ✅ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
[ ✅] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and the article template. Is all the information for struct present?
[ ✅ ] 3. The article follows our wiki-style guidelines, including No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ✅ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
[ ✅ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
[ ✅ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ✅ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and credited in the OOC section.
[ ✅ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ✅ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ✅ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
 
I think it needs some work. There's a lot of "might" and some sentences that just stop in the middle of things. It looks kind of like raw AI generated content that needs some human proofreading.
 
3-day approval timer.
 
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Could this be fixed, please?
 
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