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Here's some fixes this article still needs:
1. FM approval from
@Legix or
@Charmaylarg Dufrain
2. Damage Rating fixes
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!
The damage rating for this ammunition is a bit high, what kind of weapon is it meant to be fired out of? I've seen .50ish sized rounds doing tier 3, but I'm not so sure they'd be doing much higher. I acknowledge the difference in round size, but I'll need some more info to come to any sort of conclusion/verdict.