Jack Pine
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Hey just posting this up. This is a mass production model of a prototype that was approved a while back. Been meaning to finish this for a while. So here it is.
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Approved Submission ACE/AMP drone bodies
- Thread starter Jack Pine
- Start date
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Sorry for how long it took me to get to this, @Jack Pine. >.<
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
Status: Pending
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- In the Intelligent Control section, would you mind adding that the unit can provide processing power up to the inherent limits of the Scale Datapad? It's because with the way the article is worded now, an ACE or AMP controlled by, say, a MEGAMI could match the MEGAMI in terms of computing power - which obviously makes little sense, given that a handheld computer (even a quantum one) is vastly less capable than a supercomputer responsible for running a starship.
- I hate to be nitpicky, but in the Sensors and Communications section would you mind adding a range for the ACE's and AMP's communication systems, please? It's only because of the fact that the ACE and AMP are meant to controlled via remote.
- In the Weapons section, would you mind adding a DR value (Tier 5, Medium Anti-Armor, perhaps?) for the AMP's monomolecular-edged durandium blade, please?
- @Zack, the Faction Manager of Uso's Star Organization, needs to approve of the following technologies being used in this submission:
Status: Pending
Jack Pine
Inactive Member
@FrostJaeger fixed 1,2, and 3.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Thanks for making the requested edits in such a timely fashion, @Jack Pine! ovob
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Here are some fixes this article still needs:
Status: Pending
[
] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Here are some fixes this article still needs:
- @Zack, the Faction Manager of Uso's Star Organization, needs to approve of the following technologies being used in this submission:
Status: Pending
Noted! I've updated Jack's banners to reflect that.
FrostJaeger
Banned Member
Hello! Let's see if this submission meets the requirements for inclusion in Star Army's lore...
[ ] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.
[ ] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.
[ ] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
[ ] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.
[ ] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.
[ ] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.
[ ] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).
[ ] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
[ ] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
[ ] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[ ] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
[ ] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
[ ] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
[ ] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
[ ] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores.[
] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template.[
] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.[
] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar.[
] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate.[
] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels.[
] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern).[
] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.[
] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.[
] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.Status: Approved
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
[
] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread[
] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki[
] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to[
] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section[
] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
