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Approved Character Aendri Shasos'Shol

Aendri

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Aendri is a Yamataian, age 23 and 6' 2". He weighs 203 lbs. He has 8 inch long silver hair, and his eyes change color between blue and grey-blue. He is ambidextrous, but he tends to favor his left hand. He is tanned, and built lean. He has one sister, Shin'yuu, and is married to Mitsukai. His wife and children were killed in an attack by enemy raiders, causing him to join the Star Army. He tends to dress casually when given a choice, but is willing to dress formally or tactically if needed. In order to keep his body in good shape, he visits a gym three times a week to excercise if at all possible. Many people tend to find him a little bit cold, but this is due to the fact that the raiders were led by his friend, so he finds it a lot harder to trust peoples motives now then before. Once people get to know him though, they find out that he is actually a kind, compassionate person. He would willingly give his life to protect a true friend. He is a starship operator for the Star Army of Yamatai. He is skilled with Technology, and is a highly rated pilot. He has taken advanced math courses to improve star navigation and took the basic fighting courses, then focused into martial arts. He has done the basic communication course, but went more into starship communications rather than troop-to-troop communication. He has also taken basic survival training. He is also trained in the shadier arts, such as lockpicking and pickpocketing. He is also a great linguist, speaking, writing, and reading English and Japanese.
 
Aendri said:
ok thanks. how do i get rank?
Early ranks are based on post count. You have one now.
 
Your max rank to start a character equals your forum rank (or non-Star Army equivalent). In this case, you'd start at Santô Hei.
 
Many people like starting at higher ranks but the truth is that they generally don't need to at all. Succesful characters go up according to their accomplishment regardless of how low they began. In fact, the starting rank of Soldier Third Class can be advantageous because no one really expects much from a soldier just out of training except for him to be able to do the basics of his job.

If you make mistakes, well, you'll get a scolding but little worse than that. If you do good things, people will still ntoice. Whereas when you are higher ranked, but that as a player you have less experience, you can make OoC mistakes which will get your character in trouble because, at a higher rank, people expect better.
 
ok, think i got it now.


Name: Aendri Shasos'Shol


General Information

Species: Yamataian
Gender: male
Age: 23

Family / Creators: Shyr Shasos (father), Jhyli Shol (mother), Shin'yuu Shasos (sister), Mitsukai Shasos (wife/friend), Madyrn Shasos (son)

Employer: Star Army of Yamatai
Occupation: Starship Operator
Rank: Santo Hei
Current Assignment:


Physical Characteristics

Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 203 lbs
Measurements:
Bra Size:

Build and Skin Colour: Lean build, wiry. Tanned caucasian skin.
Facial Features and Eye Colour: eyes are blue-blue/silver (color changing)
Hair Colour and Style: Hair is silver, 8 in, worn down.

Distinguishing Features: hair color, large scar on left arm, ambidextrous.


Psychological Characteristics

Personality:
He tends to seem slightly cold, due to the murders of his wife and child by one of his friends. The murder caused a great mistrust of others in him. However, the few people he has put his trust in know he is kind, compassionate, and loyal. He would willingly lay down his life to protect his friends.

Likes: martial arts, swords, flight, and friends.
Dislikes: traitors, liars, and fools.
Goals: revenge his family, find someone to protect, discover Shin'yuu's fate/ save Shin'yuu.


History

Born in a town called Sharuta on Morant (Nassau 4), he lived with his parents until 16. In school, his teachers noted him as having an above average IQ. He studied martial arts and medieval weaponry in his spare time. At 19 he married Mitsukai, and they had one son, Madyrn. Aendri found work doing planetary transportation jobs, and Mitsukai was a biological engineer. However, when Aendri was 21, one of their friends from childhood led a group of raiders into their town, and Mitsukai and Madyrn were killed, along with Aendri's parents. The fate of Shin'yuu is not certain, though it was believed she was captured. This led Aendri to enter the naval academy to train in more advanced flight skills. He later joined the Star Army of Yamatai as a source of income, during his search for Shin'yuu.


Skills

Tecnology Operations: Trained in tech both at the academy and in working on his ship during his time as a planetary pilot. He can operate just about any computer system, and is an advanced user when it comes to ship computers/AIs.

Mathematics: During school, He took advanced math courses, and passed college level classes as a sophmore. After entering the academy, he trained more in upper level math to help with his astrogation skills.

Fighting: Aendri has gone through the basic fighting training courses, and has also retained the majority of his knowledge of martial arts and sword fighting. He is trained with most basic weaponry, and knows how to use basic explosives.

Communications: He took the basic communication courses, and focused on starship communication. he is proficient with other forms, however he is not as skilled with them.

Starship Operations: He has taken training courses in upper level starship operation, and is a first rate pilot due to his experience in his former piloting job.

Rogue: He has also trained in the shadier arts, such as lockpicking and shadowing. He also knows basic hacking and encryption skills. He also spent time on the streets, giving him an edge when dealing with street people.

Medical and Science: Due to his wife's job, he gained a basic knowledge of the biological section of science. He also trained in first aid, and emergency rescue procedures.

Trained at trained at Educational Facility 2. Is thinking about going to Kyoto War College.


OOC Notes

this is my first character, criticize and comment all you like. If this goes well, others will be coming too.
 
Where did he grow up?

Also, I find it unlikely he trained at Black Sands - it's a brutal place that's supposed to be limited to Nekos (generally in some sort of "Battle Royale"-like, survival-of-the-fittest program)
 
but is black sand not focused into different focus areas? as i indicated, Aendri is deeply trained in hand-to-hand, so he would excel at that.
 
On the Star Army Training page, it says "(Combat Arms and SAINT Nekovalkyrja ONLY)" - He's a Yamataian, not a Nekovalkyrja.
 
So, sometime in YE 27, his parents were killed by raiders...What planet did he live on? I have been doing some researh for you, but not really finding any good explanations for the killings - The Mishhu didn't raid Hoshi no Iori and Tami until YE 28, and the Elysian war was long since over. I don't think there'd be a raid on Yamatai itself, though -- it's a very safe planet, for the most part. Unless it was some sort of police raid or something?
 
Aendri said:
ok, think i got it now.


Name: Aendri Shasos'Shol


General Information

Species: Yamataian
Gender: male
Age: 23

Family / Creators: Shyr Shasos (father), Jhyli Shol (mother), Shin'yuu Shasos (sister), Mitsukai Shasos (wife/friend), Madyrn Shasos (son)

Employer: Star Army of Yamatai
Occupation: Starship Operator
Rank: Santo Hei
Current Assignment:


Physical Characteristics

Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 203 lbs
Measurements:
Bra Size:

Build and Skin color: Lean build, wiry. Tanned caucasian skin.
Facial Features and Eye color: eyes are blue-blue/silver (color changing)
Hair color and Style: Hair is silver, 8 in, worn down.

Distinguishing Features: hair color, large scar on left arm, ambidextrous.


Psychological Characteristics

Personality:
He tends to seem slightly cold, due to the murders of his wife and child by one of his friends. The murder caused a great mistrust of others in him. However, the few people he has put his trust in know he is kind, compassionate, and loyal. He would willingly lay down his life to protect his friends.

Likes: martial arts, swords, flight, and friends.
Dislikes: traitors, liars, and fools.
Goals: revenge his family, find someone to protect, discover Shin'yuu's fate/ save Shin'yuu.


History

Born in a town called Sharuta on Morant (Nassau 4), he lived with his parents until 16. In school, his teachers noted him as having an above average IQ. He studied martial arts and medieval weaponry in his spare time. At 19 he married Mitsukai, and they had one son, Madyrn. Aendri found work doing planetary transportation jobs, and Mitsukai was a biological engineer. However, when Aendri was 21, one of their friends from childhood led a group of raiders into their town, and Mitsukai and Madyrn were killed, along with Aendri's parents. The fate of Shin'yuu is not certain, though it was believed she was captured. This led Aendri to enter the naval academy to train in more advanced flight skills. He later joined the Star Army of Yamatai as a source of income, during his search for Shin'yuu.


Skills

Tecnology Operations: Trained in tech both at the academy and in working on his ship during his time as a planetary pilot. He can operate just about any computer system, and is an advanced user when it comes to ship computers/AIs.

Mathematics: During school, He took advanced math courses, and passed college level classes as a sophmore. After entering the academy, he trained more in upper level math to help with his astrogation skills.

Fighting: Aendri has gone through the basic fighting training courses, and has also retained the majority of his knowledge of martial arts and sword fighting. He is trained with most basic weaponry, and knows how to use basic explosives.

Communications: He took the basic communication courses, and focused on starship communication. he is proficient with other forms, however he is not as skilled with them.

Starship Operations: He has taken training courses in upper level starship operation, and is a first rate pilot due to his experience in his former piloting job.

Rogue: He has also trained in the shadier arts, such as lockpicking and shadowing. He also knows basic hacking and encryption skills. He also spent time on the streets, giving him an edge when dealing with street people.

Medical and Science: Due to his wife's job, he gained a basic knowledge of the biological section of science. He also trained in first aid, and emergency rescue procedures.

Trained at trained at Educational Facility 2. Is thinking about going to Kyoto War College.


OOC Notes

this is my first character, criticize and comment all you like. If this goes well, others will be coming too.
Character Approved.
 
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