ok, think i got it now.
Name: Aendri Shasos'Shol
General Information
Species: Yamataian
Gender: male
Age: 23
Family / Creators: Shyr Shasos (father), Jhyli Shol (mother), Shin'yuu Shasos (sister), Mitsukai Shasos (wife/friend), Madyrn Shasos (son)
Employer: Star Army of Yamatai
Occupation: Starship Operator
Rank: Santo Hei
Current Assignment:
Physical Characteristics
Height: 6' 2"
Weight: 203 lbs
Measurements:
Bra Size:
Build and Skin color: Lean build, wiry. Tanned caucasian skin.
Facial Features and Eye color: eyes are blue-blue/silver (color changing)
Hair color and Style: Hair is silver, 8 in, worn down.
Distinguishing Features: hair color, large scar on left arm, ambidextrous.
Psychological Characteristics
Personality:
He tends to seem slightly cold, due to the murders of his wife and child by one of his friends. The murder caused a great mistrust of others in him. However, the few people he has put his trust in know he is kind, compassionate, and loyal. He would willingly lay down his life to protect his friends.
Likes: martial arts, swords, flight, and friends.
Dislikes: traitors, liars, and fools.
Goals: revenge his family, find someone to protect, discover Shin'yuu's fate/ save Shin'yuu.
History
Born in a town called Sharuta on Morant (Nassau 4), he lived with his parents until 16. In school, his teachers noted him as having an above average IQ. He studied martial arts and medieval weaponry in his spare time. At 19 he married Mitsukai, and they had one son, Madyrn. Aendri found work doing planetary transportation jobs, and Mitsukai was a biological engineer. However, when Aendri was 21, one of their friends from childhood led a group of raiders into their town, and Mitsukai and Madyrn were killed, along with Aendri's parents. The fate of Shin'yuu is not certain, though it was believed she was captured. This led Aendri to enter the naval academy to train in more advanced flight skills. He later joined the Star Army of Yamatai as a source of income, during his search for Shin'yuu.
Skills
Tecnology Operations: Trained in tech both at the academy and in working on his ship during his time as a planetary pilot. He can operate just about any computer system, and is an advanced user when it comes to ship computers/AIs.
Mathematics: During school, He took advanced math courses, and passed college level classes as a sophmore. After entering the academy, he trained more in upper level math to help with his astrogation skills.
Fighting: Aendri has gone through the basic fighting training courses, and has also retained the majority of his knowledge of martial arts and sword fighting. He is trained with most basic weaponry, and knows how to use basic explosives.
Communications: He took the basic communication courses, and focused on starship communication. he is proficient with other forms, however he is not as skilled with them.
Starship Operations: He has taken training courses in upper level starship operation, and is a first rate pilot due to his experience in his former piloting job.
Rogue: He has also trained in the shadier arts, such as lockpicking and shadowing. He also knows basic hacking and encryption skills. He also spent time on the streets, giving him an edge when dealing with street people.
Medical and Science: Due to his wife's job, he gained a basic knowledge of the biological section of science. He also trained in first aid, and emergency rescue procedures.
Trained at trained at Educational Facility 2. Is thinking about going to Kyoto War College.
OOC Notes
this is my first character, criticize and comment all you like. If this goes well, others will be coming too.