[Aeonic] Genetic Science

[Scot]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=aeonic:science

Have at it, I know it's not much and I still need a name but I rather have it out here already rather than just sit on it.

 

[Wes]

I started trying to correct the (grammar) errors in the article but I stopped because the concept didn't make a lot of sense to me. For this to be approved it has to be understandable and more fleshed out, and also readable. Right now it looks like a few sentences found written on a bar napkin.

 

[Scot]

I'm sorry about my sloppiness, I have been thinking about it for a long time to come up with an explanation of the genetic manipulation.

It's still not quite complete article, but is much better written than before.

 

[Kyle]

How are ya doing on this Scot?

 

[Sigma]

Probably busy