A few nits.
Build
Muscle Tone tone shouldn't be capitalized.
noticable > noticeable
eyes
orangy > orangey - possibly redundant since most amber is orange.
features
otherside should be other side
Likes
Everyonce two words Every once
Horticulture
'pet'Salcra missing a space 'pet' Salcra
Other than that, looks real good, would be nice if some of the exotic aspects were wikified. eg. Salcra Weed, Herdtitan, just to make it easier for folks to find out what they are.
Beyond this, I shall defer to Exhack