Rejected Character Araneae (Random alien)

[Sosina]

looking to have my character looked over and approved

Araneae on Star Army Space Roleplay

wiki.stararmy.com

 

[Wes]

I don't think this character makes a lot of sense.

• It has a damage rating of Tier 8 in some parts, which is like a tank that can shrug off power armor aether weapons.
  • Compare to a Mindy power armor which is only Tier 4 or
  • the bio-armor of the Mishhuvurthyar which is Tier 3.
  • It's overpowered to a level I find inappropriate for the setting.
• The history section is basically empty.
• She has military/combat skills but no history to explain how they acquired those skills and isn't in a military.
• No faction
• No job/occupation
• No plots

I think the armor should be reduced to something like Tier 2-3 or just don't list a DR stat for a player character and that you should add some history and figure out her place in the setting.

 

[Wes]

After further investigation, the character is rejected because it's basically Magmanta from the game Elsword as a Monster Girl from Monster Girl Encyclopedia, using an image that's an edit or AI remix of an image found on Pinterest.

The game character:

Bringing in stuff from video games is against Star Army's rules, so this character is rejected. I've removed the image from the wiki as well.

 

[Sosina]

first of all I had no clue it was a remake of a character, I found that art and when I asked about edited art I was told it was mostly okay as long as it was altered somewhat when I asked about it, I remember asking cause trying to generate the form wanted (spider like centaur) wasn't generating at all on the AI generator being used which is why I asked about edits like this

it being from a game I had no clue about I just looked for a spider centaur pic to use to act as a seed for the AI generator

 

[Sosina]

resubmitting character with art removed

Araneae on Star Army Space Roleplay

wiki.stararmy.com