Approved Character [Baba Yaga] Argus Zepheris

[club24]

First time making a character not alligned with a faction, I'm sure there is details i've missed so @ArsenicJohn if there is anything in regards to the plot I need to fix please let me know.

I also couldn't find much info on the venom types and what is and isn't possible so if i need to make changes to that side of things im more than willing to.
Edit: just as a general rule I will take any tips for separa characters

Argus Zepheris

 

[ArsenicJohn]

It looks good to me. @Wes Does this Separa'Shan look good to you?

 

[ArsenicJohn]

@Wes Sorry to bump but is this okay?

 

[Wes]

Looks fine. It should probably say what year he left Essia, and when his escape from the bad dudes happened.

 

[ArsenicJohn]

@club24 Add the things Wes said and he's approved.

 

[club24]

added dates for time leaving and and time escaping that shouldn't break anything, @Wes @ArsenicJohn

 

[ArsenicJohn]

APPROVED.

 

[Zekec]

Oohh, I can't wait to RP! I love Separa'shan.