Approved Character Candide Neka

[Candide Neka]

((I hope I got everything right ^^;; ))

Name: Candide Neka

General Information
Species: Geshrin
Gender: Male
Age: 17

Family/Creators:
Father: Neltar Neka (deceased)
Mother: Dietna Neka (deceased)
Uncle: Pireon Neka (dying)
Faction: Star Army of Yamatai
Occupation: Pilot, Power Armor
Rank: Santô Hei
Current Assignment: Awaiting orders.
Physical Characteristics
Height: 5' 6â€

 

[I'm Only Dancing]

For my part, I think more detail in description would be good, though what youve written usually seems to pass.

A little cliche (though you noticed that too ^_^), but certainly theres nothing wrong with some cliches.

 

[Wes]

Very unusual to have a Geshrin with any sort of physical defect or disabilities (the eyes)...Perhaps it was an accidental injury or something instead?

I'll leave it up to you whether or not you want to change it. Character approved.

 

[Rei]

Not mentioning the eyes, he seems excessivly short for a Geshrin male, as well.