Approved Character Character: Satonaka Ayumi (For YSS Eucharis)

[MagicMage]

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ch ... naka_ayumi
GM: Wes

>< This is my first character here, I hope I did okay. I'm totally willing to edit anything anyone feels needs to be edited.

 

[Sigma]

Oh I've not done one of my long lists in a while... *cracks knuckles*

Distinguishing Features:​

You left this section blank. If she has none, then say so. Leaving it blank just makes it seem like you forgot about this section.

Pre-RP

Creation.

This really isn't good enough. She's been alive for 110 days. I don't think that she has had nothing happen to her in that time. Basic training, initial planetary assignments, something. Heck, even if she was just running around and eating strawberries. To have likes and dislikes, she must first have experienced them. These personality traits are not imprinted onto Nekos. Because if they were, they'd REALLY give the Nepleslians ammunition to call Nekos robots pretending to be human.

Satonaka Ayumi has the following items: «empty»

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[MagicMage]

Haha, I wondered if the history would be an issue. I wasn't really sure what to do with it because all I could see was that she'd have had been created and trained. ^^;;

I've done up a history now (however it's still a bit scant), added the inventory, and also took out the distinguishing features subcategory out.

 

[Sigma]

I don't see any other issues. I believe Wes is unavailable until after July 4 so you may have to wait. Alternatively, you could make a second character for a different faction while you're waiting.

 

[MagicMage]

Thank you. I can definitely wait until the fourth if that's the case, I don't want to over extend myself.

 

[Wes]

Hey! I'm back! (Though I'm also out of town from July 2-7 to visit family -- but I'll have my PC wiith me)

Your character looks great and is approved! Head over to the Eucharis forum!