Reviewing both articles. Next time, definitely fill out the submissions form in the sticky. I still don't know if you're submitting the sub-article.
Compact Exo-suit:
Link to nanomuscles earlier and link
here (directly to nanomuscles within the impulse components article).
"...almost instantly resulting in jumps..." Should have a comma between instantly and resulting
Link to
DR.
Should be Tier 2. This isn't hard-suit level protection, is it? Seems closer to body armor.
In DR, explain. Put Medium Anti-Personnel.
Controlling the Armor is where you're going to be able to add the most. Start there as far as filling it out goes.
"Compact Exo-suit load-bearing apparatus" Load and Apparatus should be capitalized if they're a part of the title.
Text underneath Systems and Hardpoint headers is necessitated.
"Common Man" doesn't need capitalization.
Link Nepleslia.
How are nanomuscles "finnicky"?
For the hardpoints table, is there a reason you have N/A options? I think it would be a more understandable table if it didn't include what hardpoints cannot be used and only gave information for the accessible hardpoints.
Exo-suit Load-bearing Technology:
I'll review this article once you bring more information to it. The important details of the compact exo-suit page should make their way here. I should understand this tech without having to look at the exo-suit page itself just by reading this article. I had no idea how it operated in almost any way by just reading this article and only when I got to the compact exo-suit page link did things begin to make sense.
Origin should be linked earlier, though.
Since this seems to be the product itself based on the Available Models section, I would urge you to look over
this.