Okay, since I was talking to him in PM about this I know it's here, so I'll take it. Buglet you work fast, very fast. But lets go top down on this sheet and touch things up a little. First, at the top of the character sheet there is a red link with your name, you need to go to that link and create a player page for yourself. Here is mine for reference if you don't know what they look like. Next the physical description. I would like you to elaborate a bit, generally it's best to write a description good enough that the only thing an artist trying to draw your character would need to know is what clothes they are wearing. There's more after that but let's start with those two things first.