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Hello Dee, I am Nashoba, one of the other Site Admins. A few issues with your character.
Family. Mother dead - she should have a name, as should the father and brother, even if he doesn't know them. They are part of his background and what ever GM he is going to be under needs to know all the data. His history gives absolutely no sense of what he's been through. Not knowing who is father was is an important thing, did his mother know but never tell him. What did she tell him about his father. How did that lack impact your character. What did his mother do for a living? What kind of life did he have? What was his schooling? etc. What prompted him to enlist, his goal is rather weak. He joined the military for some reason. Is it to make money? Get enough skills to be a merc what?
We need more than a two short lines to describe twenty years of his life.
But seriously, which plot is this character directed towards? Information like that is rather important because it means we can get the appropriate GM(s) to look at it. I see that it is supposedly for the Nepleslian military. There's NSS Hobby, which is Open RP, and 4th Fleet which is more formal.
But seriously, which plot is this character directed towards? Information like that is rather important because it means we can get the appropriate GM(s) to look at it. I see that it is supposedly for the Nepleslian military. There's NSS Hobby, which is Open RP, and 4th Fleet which is more formal.
Now I'm confused. SPIT is an IPG plot but this character looks like he was supposed to be a Marine. It even lists 4th AASP as the desired plot. From everything I see, he should be a Marine in 4th Fleet.