Welcome to Star Army, Flaser. I'm Doshii Jun, one of the character reviewers for the site.
I can't review the bio until it's fully complete. Skills are an important part of that.
I will, however point out two things: One a technicality, the other a concern.
1. Unless you drew the art you're using to represent Dan, it needs to be removed immediately. Only original content (as created by you, or a commissioned artist) is allowed here at Star Army.
2. You've created an independent, something we haven't seen in a while. Especially among new players, it's discouraged — part of the essence of the SARP is investing yourself into a plot filled with certain players, and being an independent robs you of that experience. You might be able to manage to wiggle into plots as a temporary part, but you'll be imposing upon other GMs to let you in on a temporary basis.
Some might be OK with that. Some might not. This is only a warning; if you're determined to go for it, you can.
I'm not adverse to you having your own ship, though any other time I would. Your character's not overpowered, and your stated intentions focus on things other than dominating other characters. For those reasons I'm OK with you having a ship. But please consider what I said — independents rarely last long.