Alright, this is already looking a lot better. We still got some work to do though. Since you mentioned preferring bullet points before, I'll go ahead and list some suggestions.
- Have an opening sentence or two at the very top of the page saying that it's a tougher, more efficient processor technology, made by so-and-so, and what year. Nothing complex.
- Reorganize the About section for easier readability; instead of immediately focusing on the technological advancements, have the About section talk about the end-results the consumer would get. Things like how it's performance is better and that it's resistant to EMP phenomena. Then explain in-brief the technology behind it as it currently does.
There's more to do, but I don't want to swamp you with a whole bunch of stuff at once. Still, post again when you've either made changes or feel you would like to know more.