Approved Submission [Elysian Martial Art] Velos Ennoia

[META_mahn]

Submission Type: Martial art
Template Used: Martial Art (just used the Ninjutsu one)
Submission WIP URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=wip:martial_arts:velos_evvoia
Submission Destination URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=martial_arts:velos_evvoia

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? I AM THE (co)FM.
(No, @FrostJaeger)
Faction requires art? Unless you want diagrams. But no.

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? No
Previously Submitted? Y’all ever seen gun-fu for angels before? Nah, I don’t think so.

Notes: Made in an hour. Inspired by the Kingsmen, as well as movies like the Matrix and Equilibrium.

 

[Ametheliana]

This article could use some wiki links to other articles!

Please put text before your quotes.

Each section of an article should generally contain prose immediately after any section header.

"Aside from the two main forms, Velos Ennoia also teaches how to use a given Elysian's strong psychic ability to sense sentient, biological beings nearby through either probing with their mind or feeling the presence of their mind." (Needs explaining.)

 

[FrostJaeger]

@META_mahn - I'll be looking this over tomorrow (Saturday), March 24th.

 

[Reynolds]

Equilibrium was basically my inspiration for the generic SACQC. Until John Wick came out, which really nailed what I was trying to say. So, I like it!

If you want to give me a blurb to put here I can add it when it's approved. Or you could add it yourself? While we're here, if you have something more interesting than that placeholder for Pankration, that'd be cool!

 

[META_mahn]

Well, it was made in an hour, lol.

Article fixed. Hopefully. Kinda.

@Reynolds I'll probably write something myself for both of them.

 

[Ametheliana]

Approved

 

[META_mahn]

Oh I misspelled the name. It’s supposed to be Velos Ennoia in the URL.

 

[FrostJaeger]

As the Faction Manager of Elysia, I APPROVE of this submission.