Approved Character Evelyn Fritz [Abwehran]

[SSharp]

Well, I'd have to say this is the first female character I made for SARP. Ironically, I never knew what BWH was until I had to look it up.

Funny, eh?

The Article is Here.

 

[Abwehran Commander]

Format and history wise I have no problem with this.

The Light Infantry Armor has yet to be approved due to lack of art, but other wise this has my okay.

 

[Scot]

I'm a bit hesitant, since the AAF and recent updates took place after the ship left space dock.

Currently the ship would not have the body armor to provide (I assume the ship would normally provide the armor, though I guess family could pitch in for one). This isn't to slow down down the acceptance as it's just minor concerns.

Edit: To be clear I don't mind the AAF thing being there, especially since my plot's been in the water longer than it should have Y.Y

 

[Abwehran Commander]

Actually, the abwehran military have always been known as the AAF. It's just that I prefer characters to have the branch listed rather than the military organization.

 

[SSharp]

Fixed the Light Armour thing.

 

[Kai]

Well, Like my usual reviews, My only suggestion is to flesh out the skills. However, that's not going to hold up your approval.

Since this already has the FM's approval, as well as the GM's, and passes muster for my purposes, I will declare her APPROVED