Approved Character [Fifth Fleet: Squad 13] Maki Rin

[cyborgakadjmoose]

Character Article URL: Here
Preferred Plot's GM: Kai

First time making a character for the Star Army of Yamatai, so any advice would be helpful.

 

[Wes]

The designated marksman is more of a position than an occupation in the Star Army; the occupation should be one from the Star Army's list (presumably infantry). No other issues. A good neko bio.

 

[cyborgakadjmoose]

The designated marksman is more of a position than an occupation in the Star Army; the occupation should be one from the Star Army's list (presumably infantry). No other issues. A good neko bio.

Good to hear. Changed the occupation to Infantry.

 

[Kai]

I've looked over the character and all seems well. Nicely put together Bio, all the proper info it needs, you even put down the Fifth's preferred armor.

I'm not sure if I can officially approve characters at this time, but this does have my stamp of approval.

 

[Wes]

GMs have approval abilities for their own plot.

APPROVED, moved to approved forum.