I took a look at the updates you've done, and it seems good. I made two small edits, to make her fluent in Trade and clarifying that she's just nervous about using computers when people are watching, she's not actually going to break them. Since your primary job is using a computer. The only other thing I wanted to mention is that I ask for everyone on the Heartbreaker to list a loadout for their Mindy, so everyone knows what everyone has equipped at a glance. You can take a look at another new player's setup for a quick example (
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=characters:yamatai:alexis_morwind#inventory) or a more complicated one (
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=members:leighlink:blesi_ingrid). I'm sure if you can't decide, someone will be willing to assist you.
But, this is
APPROVED already! Just fix that when you can. I'll try to get you introduced this Saturday with my next post. You can assume you were brought on board the ship between Mission 3 and 4 if you want to go ahead and post, though. Feel free to ask for help getting integrated. Just need
@Wes to move this to the proper place now.