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Approved Character [HAS Reva Maya] Maliq Al'Kuyun

1) Why would his horns be white ivory? They're brownish orange by nature. Somatic tuning could make them white, though.

2) Run the history through a spell checker. Judgment in the personality should be spelled judgement.

3) You almost linked Desert Wind, but not quite. Add the brackets.

4) Is he a barista or waiter? Two very different things. (For instance, I have been a barista before a lot a lot, but never have I been a waiter. They're just very different.)
 
1. Fixed, made it made it a brownish orange

2. All right, that any better?

3. Fixed, should be properly linked

4. Fixed, should just be waiter now
 
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This looks good on my end. I noticed you made some formatting changes I was going to let go but that's cool that you did (like inventory)!
 
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