After reviewing the changes
@club24 ive found the following:
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] 1. The destination URL should be a page in the appropriate namespace and titled lower_case_with_underscores
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] 2. The article is in the appropriate format and article template
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] 3. The article follows our wiki style guidelines, including: No forced line breaks, text after each section header, etc.
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] 4. The article is easily read and free of errors in spelling and grammar
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] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
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] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
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] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
Very good progress! I have taken the liberty of changing the only remaining instance of
Armoured to the american English
Armored since i noticed that was the only instance left not changed. If you wish to keep the original you can change it back but please note it will not comply with the check list and i will have to revoke my
APPROVED status i will be giving it if you choose this hill to die on~
Other than this, It is not a requirement but more a piece of advice. 5,000 KS is half of what a shuttle like this should cost, minimum. If you choose to change this in the future please respond here and i will approve it again.
And now for the final bit:
Thanks again for submitting an article to the wiki! Time for some final steps for the reviewer...
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] 1. State clearly that the article is approved in the submission thread
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] 2. Move the wiki article to its permanent (destination) location on the wiki
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] 3. Move the submission thread to the Approved Submissions subforum or get a moderator to
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] 4. Edit the article to add a link to the approval thread in the OOC Notes section
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] 5. Link other articles to the approved article as appropriate (equipment lists, etc.)
Please note that since GH doesnt have a
starships or
ships category i havent added it to your product list incase you where intending to start a new one for ships or add it alongside the URSA and other vehicles. I will leave that to your discression.