Approved Submission HS-SD2-1a Âmuso Sae Ibâka

[Nashoba]

Submission Type: Diplomatic Vessel
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:hidden_sun_clan:ships:hs_sd2-1a

Faction: Poku Saeruo Degonjo
FM Approved Yet? Yes, back when I created this
Faction requires art? Sometimes

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yew
Previously Submitted? Actually it should have been, since the ship was mentioned during the YE38 International Conference.

Notes:

 

[Wes]

In the habitat section there seems to be an unfinished sentence. Was there supposed to be more?

Everything else looks fine with this submission.

 

[Talarn]

Wes beat me to it ...
I like it a lot. It's very flat.

Also yeah, there is a 'The' in the Habitat Section .. is there more, Nashoba?

 

[Nashoba]

Nope there wasn't supposed to be more. The rogue The has been removed

 

[Wes]

Approval timer: 3 days!

 

[CadetNewb]

Since the 3 days have passed, I'll go ahead and mark this article APPROVED