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Ideas, Critique, insight.

Ira

Ser Spit
Inactive Member
I am rather enthusiastic about the RP, and am very happy to be here. So as a result I do not mind doing my own thing and I am very much a SCI FI junkie.

So I STARTED creating a potentially playable race to RP with at a future time.

What I want here is opinions and ideas from YOU the people, so that I can tweak it, change it, and hear what every who is interested in this sort of thing has to say. I should note I am not a scientist, nor am I a biologist, i merely play both on TV. It is NOT ready for submission so consider this MONSTER of a POST merely a rough draft.



I am very excited about this idea, and I hope you all enjoy the Brain vomit I am about to post.

~Tony~




Overview

Home Planet: Gartaga

Diameter: 11,000 Miles
Landmasses: 21%
Oceans: 79%
Resources: Poor
Flora: very high
Fauna: high
Gravity 1.3 Gs
Average day: 23 human hours
Yearly Cycle: Every 2 human years
Dominate Race: Gartagens
Moons: 2
Desert Moon. Sholeshe
Orbiting asteroid Sholisho
Population: 14.8 Billion
Sholisha: Colony
Ji’kaa Divshe Mining colony, used to make the hulls of Gartagen Ships. Ji’kaa is a large asteroid in the first asteroid belt of the Gartagen home system. It is an excellent deposit of metal and ore. In specific the precious Xortium Ore that the Gartagens have at long last managed to find a away to use in the creation of their ships hulls.



Race Name: Gartagen
Sexes: Male and Female
Sexual Dimorphism: High, The Female is much smaller
Classification: Mammal
Intelligence: Similar level to that of humans.
Blood: Deep red
Strength: On par with basic humans
Agility: Similar to humans
Lifespan: Roughly 110-130 years






The Gartagens are a hardy and strong willed species that evolved from small simian like creatures on their world of Gartaga. Their initial inception as a species is unknown, but it can largely be assumed that the Gartagens evolved from single celled organisms and clawed its way to the top of the food chain in a similar fashion to that of humans. Their earliest settlements are clustered on one of the central continents of their lush home world, but as archeologists have discovered, the species migrated to all parts of the planet and over the next few thousand years established dominance over their world. Isolated tribes grew and prospered, discovered fire, the wheel, and eventually religion. They mastered metal and eventually dabbled in warfare. City states sprang up, and as such, nation states formed. Explorers began questing out and discovering the other ethnic groups across the ocean., nations rose and fell. An empire or two came to dominate the international circles until they too fell. The race seemingly the victim of its own success indeed prospered from the constant struggle to better understand their world and them selves. They eventually entered what could be considered their modern age, and coupled with the advent of advanced machinery, and black powder weapons, the face of their world was changed when it plunged into a world war. This saw the advent of radical new technologies, which included their variations of computers, rocket weapons, as well as experiments into early energy weapons, such as microwave caster designed to fry entire battalions of soldiers on the battle field Chemical war fare ran rampant, until surprisingly, the extremist factions in the war defeated the allied factions, and formed something similar to what Earth’s Rome was. This empire stood for over four hundred years until it eventually broke apart. The new nations sprang up over night, and an uneasy peace formed over the large Terran like world of Gartaga.


The Information age: This was the age that marked the discovery of genetics, modern medicine, and nuclear technology. Peaceful until a frightening technology was developed to the horror of many of the world’s nations. Cloning. This technology regarded by the founders as a miracle, and to the belligerents as an affront to the very idea of life. The ability bypass nature and to create it in a lab. This technology was followed by religious upheaval, and eventually a war unlike one the Gartagens had ever seen. Over one two hundred and fifty years prior to the present day setting of SARP the Gartagen race waged a modern aged war, that ended with the deaths of over 800,000,000 people on their world. Cities were destroyed, entire ethnic groups were eradicated, and their was of course no clear victor in site. With most of Gartaga in ruins and most of the world governments destroyed, it left only two types of people. The dead, and the survivors. The Gartagens survived its war to end all wars, and this was the foundation of their new ideology. An ideology based on the foundation and union of all Gartagens. A new world order, run by the people for the people. It was hardly an age of pacifism, as the clones from the War of light were hearded up and exterminated. The nuclear missiles were dismantled and moth balled. And the survivors of the war seemingly banded together and entered a new age.

The Golden Age: The New World order or Gartagen Union formed, and set about the task of rebuilding the devastated world. Fifty years after the war, entire cities had been rebuilt, social organization was remade in the image of civic duty, and compassion for your fellow Gartagens. Love of thee self, and the fact that every body is responsible for your actions were instilled in the young minds of the Gartagen people. 100 years after the war of light, and all that remained of it were museums. As well as reminders to all the people of the world to just how close they had come to killing their entire world.

New Problems, New Frontier. (Fifty years ago to the present) about fifty years ago the Gartagens had come to a problem that Earth had come to so long ago. Population, fifty years of peace had brought in a massive population boom. Secondly they had all but exhausted their planet’s resources, and it was becoming high time for them to branch out in order to save their over populated world. Space exploration had always been occupied, but never on this scale. A space station was build in orbit of their world, small colonies formed on their moons. With in the span of twenty years The Union had mining colonies on their asteroids, and functioning mini colonies through out the home system. But all of these great achievements paled in comparison to the desperate gamble they took. (Ten years ago) The Gartagen’s completed their first successful test of a functional (and safe) FTL engine on a humble probe, that was directed into a cluster of stars( Home of the Yamatai Star empire) Filled with a brief biological description of the race, and a simple mathematical greeting.

The Expedition. (Present) Cautious and meticulous, the Union has spent the last ten years and Trillions in currency on developing the ‘New World” project. Two full fleets, were constructed, one to defend the home system, and one to defend the project. A colony ship, nearly a mile long had been constructed with a large hyper drive, enough to push it into a star system where they located a habitable world. The Goal, to establish a fully functional, and self sustained colony. The Cargo of this vast colony ship. Fifty thousand men women and children in cryogenic suspension, with food and supplies to start new lives on this new world.

Biology

Appearance: The male Gartagens stand roughly 5’5 - 6 feet in height, and usually weigh around 200 lbs. the females are smaller, and vary in height from four feet to 5’5” Their skin is soft, and similar to that of humans, including sweat pores. The hair is in fact much thicker tentacle like protrusions that hang limply from the head. On the arms and legs it grows in the form of tiny little “Spikes” the hair is similar to that of humans, it is just excess calcium that grows from the body, designed to control the release of heat. The hands sport two thick digits, and one very thick thumb. It functions on a similar level to that of humans. The feet are cloven, and split into two toes that are somewhat similar to that of a deer’s foot. The Gartagens walk directly on the toes, giving them a wider stride, and a distinct hopping gait when moving. The skin tones vary, taking on a Rather pastel appearance, as a result of their Orange sun. It can be a vibrant blue to a dark violate, greens are common, as is grey.

Reproduction: Social species, that develops close bonds. Male and female sex organs are located in between the legs. Mating occurs in similar fashion to humans. One pitches(usually the male) The other receives.

Gestation is roughly 12 months. The female then births young from in-between her legs.
Racial advantages: Gartagens tend to be able to run faster, and longer with humans. The exhibit a good deal more stamina then every day humans.

Contrary to the stamina. They are about the same strength, and toughness of a Human. Able to be hurt and killed with the same amount of ease.




Economy
A socialist economic structure is in place with the government regulating all forms of trade down to the private level.

Religion, Mythology, etc: Religions of old have long since past, how ever the Gartagens do have standing religions in today’s age. They vary from monotheism, to polytheism depending on the regions of the planet


Society
Freebased hierarchy. Built around duty to the self and to the family. The government is absolute and of course knows best. It borders on that of a police state but is much less harsh in its day to day control. Schooling is biased towards the government, and the freedom of speech that Gartagen’s enjoy is considered option and a privilege.

Art: Gartagen is as diverse as the species it self, I could spend all day describing examples f some of the ideas I have.

Science: Every dynamic, the Gartagens have mastered Fusion technology and power, giving them the ability to maintain the power source needed to power their FTL reactors. Research is coveted, and constant, with the government encouraging scientific growth in areas it shows interested in. the Government regulates most forms of research, including that of the private sector. This limits research in some fields, but allows he desired fields to be utilized.

Military: Military service is an honor and a privilege for any young Gartagen to select, rather large considering their standards. They are a war like and militaristic people. They regard Military service as the highest sacrifice for the to the Union and cherish and honor those who join. It is a big organization, one that many of the commit their entire lives to. Typical service is eight years. But a lot of the NCOs’ are lifers. Its structure is built on the doctrine of professionalism, and following a strict set of codes defined by honor and respect for your self and your enemy. Those who join receive the finest training and equipment that can be offered. In times of serious threat, internal of external, a draft can be put into effect.

Star ships: The Union Navy is still “New” so what you see are new generation of Gartagen Star ships. State of the art by their standards. Now a Yamataian, Jiyuuian, or Nepelesian commander would not see a sleek beautiful war ship like the ones they command. They would see a Bulky, war machine, with Mass Driver cannons, and rotating sections built into their hulls to mimic gravity. For the Coolness of it. The Gartagens have created power armored systems to equip their soldiers, allowing them to pilot in space similar to star fighters. They do use star fighters how ever.


Colonization: In its infancy.


Personalities: Like the stars in the sky, some of them are bright, and some not so bright. Gartagen personalities are as hard to gauge as those of the SARP Empires. As a species looking at a galactic community, they would be scared, and curious.


Gartagen Government: Autocratic. Mimics democracy with elected individuals, but ‘The Leader” Ultimately holds the power, and has the final say of everything that occurs in the Union.








Racial flaw: They are haughty, and believe in their own manifest destiny. This attitude could lead to their undoing…or perhaps their ultimate riumph.
 
Seems good to me, but who would be playing as these people? It seems like nine of ten player-made races end up eventually abandoned as soon as the owner has something IRL that pulls him/her away from the site. The Melumsi, Phods, Kodians, and many other races are basically nothing more than wiki articles these days and I don't want that lame fate to be shared by your character. I would like to know how the race would benefit the SARP in the long-term in ways beyond merely being an interesting race article.

Please don't be discouraged by this post.
 
Actually I have some what of a hand in this little article. Tony bounced Ideas off of me, So I would totally be down to play one of these "Gartagens"
 
Well I have thought about that. I was on the forum in the past and remembered seeing "Dead Ideas"

I Plan to dedicate my self to them, and keep them active. I have only ideas at the moment that need to be grounded up and run through. So i was hoping to get some of the other players to help me. It seems only fair to let people have their advice and personal input and even likes imposed on this species.

technologically I have several stipulations.( which i know has been a problem in the past.) I love the idea of them starting out low. Rotating sections on their ships. Nuclear weaponry, Mass driver based weapons. No shields, but thick heavy armor, perhaps an ablative coating.

I want their ships and technology to be "Primative" By SARP standards, but brutally effective.

Now getting them active would mean keeping them with an active and interesting plot.

They are obviously a young race, new to outer space, and as you have guess dynamic and aggressive. I imagine this would cause misunderstandings with the dominant empires in this quadrant of space.

So Wes if you have suggestions, or even something to include to this Race, please share it with me. Star Army RP is your life, i'm just paying rent.
 
My recommendation is to continue working on this race while you continue to get familiar with the setting over the course of the next 3 months. Who knows, maybe the Zenpyou will encounter them by accident somewhere on the outskirts of the Colonies. ;)
 
Oh don't worry I am in no hurry, I want this taken seriously, so I plan to take it seriously.
 
Benefits.(I did not answer Wes’s question lol)

OOCLY

Well The vision I have for them I think is rather cool. Style is a key. I mean who wants to play some ugly creature. Their appearance is humanoid, the facial structure will be similar to humans. You will have sleek and sexy females, their tentacle like hair and color giving them a very exotic Sci Fi appearance.

The males will of course be sleek and sexy as well, again with exotic look. But they will be more…burley stronger.

You have several extraterrestrial race in active play. But they are so specialized. Dedicate to slaving and such. These guys I based off of humanity. You have a very broad appeal, you could do almost anything you wanted with a small group of them so long as it could e explained ICLY. Example the Zen you is hunting pirates, They could encounter a small Gartagen Vessel hunting similar pirates, or engaging in pirate activities.


IC wise

As a plot device, you have a different threat to the local empires. Unlike the savage and vicious Mishuu. You have an aggressive young race. Their technology may seem like something to laugh at, but they make up for it in virtuosity. A wise commander would know not to laugh at an alien fleet. They are sitting their with hundreds of ships and loaded weapons, they obviously mean business. Be it they are primitive is moot, they pose a different kind of threat and can take on the role of enemy and ally to the sector.

I’m not making them Xenophobic, because who knows they could be come friends with the UOC, Yamatai, neplesia. Who could send advisors. But that is of course at this time scratching the surface.
 
Wes said:
Seems good to me, but who would be playing as these people? It seems like nine of ten player-made races end up eventually abandoned as soon as the owner has something IRL that pulls him/her away from the site. The Melumsi, Phods, Kodians, and many other races are basically nothing more than wiki articles these days and I don't want that lame fate to be shared by your character. I would like to know how the race would benefit the SARP in the long-term in ways beyond merely being an interesting race article.

Please don't be discouraged by this post.
Melumsi may be inactive in plots, but they aren't dead. I still work on them when the inspiration strikes and I've got plans...they're just a little difficult to put into action at the moment. Also, important things like culture, ships, and even some of the basic tech are still in development.

Making sure I won't abandon them after bringing them back into the spotlight is another of my concerns. So, while they may be silent, they aren't completely abandoned yet.
 
I am playing. if you get approved with this, I am already thinking of a female character to use with in the military.

Oh, I also think they should have tails.
 
Tails?

Like...why the hell aren't you IMing me with this crap?! nvm

Tails...maybe. What kind of Tail, it would have to have a function for their biology. Considering the lush jungle environ ment, and muscular thick tail for balance?
 
Uh well...ever saw cash of the titans? Kinda like calabos's tail, the big red devil guy, cursed by zeus!
 
Hrm....

I LIKE IT! They will have a thick, agile tail! Like that red beast from Clash of the Titans.
 
The biggest problem, which I have seen come up before, is that for them to be spacefaring, and[/] heretofore undiscovered, they would have to be amazingly far away. Exploratory ships have been all over the nearby areas.
 
Yes, I was also noting that when i was going through the necessary data needed to create this race.

I have come up with several ideas to make sense.

One I wrote in that they picked up garbled useless transmissions already. So they are aware they are not alone, which explains why they have built up a navy before they actually leave their home system. Secondly I took a peek at the star map.

There is a nice "Unmapped" spot
on it. So I figured(if it is of course okay with the plot makers) their home system would be located on the left corner of that area. So you are very correct in that they are a good distance away.

Also I am wanting to see true First Contact situations with the already present empires and races. I am also not ruling out that their was a past exploration of their world before they had entered space. Of course it all depends on where Wes and the others would feel comfortable too. I can't very well go digging around in another man's fridge with out asking.
 
Ira said:
Their appearance is humanoid, the facial structure will be similar to humans. You will have sleek and sexy females, their tentacle like hair and color giving them a very exotic Sci Fi appearance.

The males will of course be sleek and sexy as well, again with exotic look. But they will be more…burley stronger.

I recommend making them more alien-like. The less humanoid the better.

https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=ra ... sion_rules

Avoid being pseudohuman.

That means you shouldn't call yourselves a separate race if you're really just humans with special powers, minor cosmetic changes, or an extra organ or two. Staff usually really dislike this, though there is a small possibly to convince staff to forgo this if your species submission is unique and well-written enough. Still, be forewarned that this alone may be grounds for the denial of a submission; the setting already has more than enough pseudohuman species.
 
Their is a difference between pseudo human, and humaniod.

I'm going humaniod. So far they will look more alien then several species on the forums.

I'm still thinking out the appearance.

I'm keeping them humaniod for one reason, to allow people to be able to relate to them. As well as want to play them.
 
Okay, sounds like a plan. No one wanted to play the Phods, so you probably have a point. :?

Please keep in mind that most major species in SARP are actually human-based, though. Elysians, Nekos, and Yamataians all look human-like because they were designed to be. Alien species do not have this luxury.
 
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