In the only sentence immediately under "about the ship" โ can that be made a complete sentence, please? Also, please check for grammar bits such as "it's / its" and spelling (that isn't related to European spellings).
Please fill in the Imperial measurements or dump them. Doesn't matter which.
Is the
Alcubierre Drive pre-approved? I can't find that word in the wiki (except a ref on a L'Kor page?
@Ametheliana). You also mention the base I'ee particle drive below and helpfully link to it, but it isn't referred to higher up.
The damage rating is fine. It's a big colony ship without shields; I can believe it's meant to be that durable.
Does it have a birthing center? How many I'ee started out on it, and how many are on it now? Because this is somewhat of a one-off ship, without mention of other I'ee using it, it feels like the ship article could get farther into those details.
Just confirming: No ship-mounted weapons? Does it have any defensive measures?
No explanations of the weather system and how it works? How they go about using the shipboard agriculture?
I like the submission, but I'm left wanting a little more, especially for possible I'ee players who could use some more bits.
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