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Approved Submission [IIS] Iemochi Lifestyle

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If it's ok with you @META_mahn , I'll take over this review.

So far, the article looks good, but since there's no actual products yet, you should either remove it, or make a simple bullet list with the items. Additionally, I think you need to have @Wes permission to make this there.
 
Sure, thanks for your reply Cadet

I'll pop some products in the description and wait for Wes to give it a nod ^^
 
Why isn't this in WIP?
 
Darn, it must have got caught up when I restructured the IIS articles. Will change now.
 
I'd like you to remove all forced line breaks from the article because they violate the wiki style guidelines.

Also: Yamataians despise chewing gum, it's offensive for a Yamataian company to make it.
 
You got it

Replaced line breaks with bullet points.
Removed chewing gun.
Changed namespace.
 
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FM approved.
 
If I had to guess, it's because Yamataians are most familiar with how Nepleslians eat it - spitting it on the ground after they're done.
 
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