NightDreamer09
Inactive Member
Tagging @Glein for GM approval but I will recommend putting the same amount of effort into her history that went into her relationship notes.
Okay, working on it~I would agree with Ame in this particular situation. Even if they're little more than a 99-day Neko, they'll have had some kind of experiences thus far. After all, history helps define personality. Knowing where one came from and how that shaped them, including the experiences which gave them their most defining traits are useful tools, especially as a GM since it gives me hooks to see about using at the high level, and points for other players on the plotship to explore at the low level.
I like the riskWhile there's nothing particularly objectionable about the character, I'd recommend that, as a new player, you don't make a SAINT operative to start out. It's a difficult profession to fulfill in roleplay and you'd be better suited learning the ropes in a more standard profession.
They don't really know what they're talking about when it comes to SAINT but you do you.As I talked with Pine and Glein, both never discouraged me on her profession and now I feel kind of commited
I don't know how committed you are to her profession since her history still doesn't include the normal aspects of training in the SAINT program.
When I first joined the site I immediately asked raz to join his plot as a SAINT agent and I was immediately told that it's not an appropriate beginner character occupation for someone to start with. He even messaged Wes to let him know he had turned me around and it was all fine. I have some SAINT characters now, but he is right in that it is not a good starting character and I'll add: it's not a good starter for someone that hasn't done a lot of wiki diving in order to come to their conclusion. Whereas with most occupations where you will have to read one occupation page, with SAINT you have to read many more like conditioning, training, operative, and intelligence officer, and maybe more that I don't know about because this occupation is not my forte even now.
I am going to request that you find a new occupation. You don't seem to have a firm grasp on the setting, yet, and when you do it'll be a great place to be but for now something that requires less of you starting out seems to be the answer @NightDreamer09.
Side note: When I said put the same effort into her history that you put into her relationship notes, I did not mean add more to her history about her relationships. I meant add about her training and life outside of family, perhaps.
I've slowly reworked the story with the imputs from Glein to make it somewhat deeper and more coherent.@NightDreamer09 i was wondering if you are still interested in this character?if so please respond to it so that approve phase can continue, if you require any help do poke us in discord or here, we gladly help!
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