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Faction: Independent
FM Approved Yet? There's no FMs where we're going. (But we can tag @Gunhand4171 or @Ametheliana since I guess we're technically in Nepleslia?)
Faction requires art? Yes, as I'm certain Power Armor requires it.
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? No
Contains New art? Yes
Previously Submitted? No
Notes: Only one. (Plus, I guess I should link the series of RPing that led up to the Warlock being made that happened in stories + a JP? Here it is. I don't think it really matters much, but it should help show that this wasn't just some "leap to sudden creation" for once in my book of things.)
I'd like to kamehameha Eldrich Blast the enemy Reaper, please. This review is for: Warlock Mk1
The submitted article is/has… [ Y ] A very high level of overall quality
It has a drawbacks section. Not even Mindys have a drawback section.
[ Y ] A general topic sentence under the title header
[ Y ] Artwork (Required for new species; Strongly recommended for vehicles and hand weapons)
I'm not sure what this is, please explain :kappa:
[ Y ] Needed and/or useful to the setting
Civilian PA. Expands on lore. Therefore good.
[ Y ] In the proper format/template
[ Y ] Proofread for spelling and grammar
[ Y ] Easy to read and understand (not a lengthy mass of technobabble)
SO MUCH LORE
[ Y ] Wikified (terms that could be a link should be a link)
[ Y ] No red and/or broken links
[ Y ] Reasonably scientifically plausible
[ Y ] Reasonably neutral point of view
The submitted article is/does not… [ N ] Overpowered (or cutting tech for a faction with little or no roleplay)
Unless this is Aldnoah Zero, you're not gonna see someone kill a guy with this. Probably.
[ N ] Obtusely redundant
[ N ] Contain copy pasta descriptions of systems or interior compartments
[ N ] Unauthorized by faction managers or player-controlled corporation
ame did the thing
[ N ] Contain references to IC events that have not occurred (SM must authorize retcons)
[ N ] Use second-person language (“you” or “your”) unless it is an instructional guide aimed at players.
[ N ] Use bombastic language (“virtually immune,” “nearly indestructible,” “insanely powerful,” “horrible effects”)
[ N ] Use an unbalanced header/text ratio (many headers but sections are one-liners)
[ N ] Use major unapproved sub-articles that should be submitted separately
[ N ] Lacking Detail
lore text
[ N ] Images hosted on sites other than stararmy.com (Photobucket, Imageshack, etc are not allowed)
The article has… [ Y ] Speeds in compliance with the Starship Speed Standard, if applicable
[ Y ] Damage Capacity and Damage Ratings in compliance with the DR Guidelines
[ Y ] The in-character year of creation/manufacture. (Should be current year. Future years not allowed).
[ Y ] The Standard Product Nomenclature System, if applicable.