Toshiro
Well-Known Member
Submission Type: Kirie and Keiko Thought Armors and Weapons
Submission URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:yamatai:ketsurui_fleet_yards:kirie_thought_armor
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:yamatai:ketsurui_fleet_yards:keiko_thought_armor
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:kage:project_thought:kirie_and_keiko_accessories
(and all links under the table in the accessories page)
Faction:
FM Approved Yet? Original, Yes. Updates, No. @Wes
Faction requires art? Yes
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes, in the context of existing articles being updated. All the weapons on the accessories page, specifically.
Contains New art? Yes-ish, one of the weapons has a blown up picture added made from existing art.
Previously Submitted? Yes in its original form, no in this updated one.
Notes: This is chiefly an update to bring the Kirie, Keiko, and all of its existing weapons to DRv3 and current speed standards, though there are a few amendments. Both the Kirie and Keiko have all of their formerly built-in armaments converted into modular ones, the former locations of the hard-wired wearpons are turned into hardpoints, and two additional hip hardpoints were added. I elaborate on the self destruct capabilities of the Kirie and Keiko at the very bottom of their articles, as well as the self destruct capabilities of the canisters of the W3303 Particle Gun. I removed one of the mini-missiles that is no longer valid outright from the Kirie and Keiko's mini missile launcher inventory as well. I also limited ranges to three seconds' worth where found.
I might add more stuff later in yet another submission, but that would likely be a 1C version. This 1B version will just get the article to current spec and improve versatility.
Submission URL:
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:yamatai:ketsurui_fleet_yards:kirie_thought_armor
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=faction:yamatai:ketsurui_fleet_yards:keiko_thought_armor
https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=corp:kage:project_thought:kirie_and_keiko_accessories
(and all links under the table in the accessories page)
Faction:
FM Approved Yet? Original, Yes. Updates, No. @Wes
Faction requires art? Yes
For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? Yes, in the context of existing articles being updated. All the weapons on the accessories page, specifically.
Contains New art? Yes-ish, one of the weapons has a blown up picture added made from existing art.
Previously Submitted? Yes in its original form, no in this updated one.
Notes: This is chiefly an update to bring the Kirie, Keiko, and all of its existing weapons to DRv3 and current speed standards, though there are a few amendments. Both the Kirie and Keiko have all of their formerly built-in armaments converted into modular ones, the former locations of the hard-wired wearpons are turned into hardpoints, and two additional hip hardpoints were added. I elaborate on the self destruct capabilities of the Kirie and Keiko at the very bottom of their articles, as well as the self destruct capabilities of the canisters of the W3303 Particle Gun. I removed one of the mini-missiles that is no longer valid outright from the Kirie and Keiko's mini missile launcher inventory as well. I also limited ranges to three seconds' worth where found.
I might add more stuff later in yet another submission, but that would likely be a 1C version. This 1B version will just get the article to current spec and improve versatility.