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Rejected Submission [Lazarus] Centurion Escort Variable Fighter

OsakanOne

OsakanOne

Retired Member
Submission Type: Vehicle, drone
Submission URL: https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=lazarus:super_hoplite

Faction:
FM Approved Yet? (Yes/No; Who, When) NA
Faction requires art? (Yes/No) No, but its there anyway

For Reviewers:
Contains Unapproved Sub-Articles? (Yes/No) Not as far as I know, pull my socks up if it does.
Contains New art? (Yes/No) No
Previously Submitted? (Yes/No; explain reason if rejected) No

Notes:
  1. Submission follows mook template.
  2. Some balancing adjustment or clarification may be necessary.
  3. Looking to make something that while dangerous in numbers, a smart player or someone who plans can get behind and really mess up, discouraging aggressive head-on attacks.
  4. You know, something that if you approach as a soldier will bone you but if you go in with a more hunter like mentality, picking them off from the herd like Rambo, you'll really have a good time with?
  5. So yeah.
  6. Basically, some much needed player-fodder. Or a schmup enemy.
  7. And robots or something.
  8. Nice.
 
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Are these supposed to be made out of out Hoplite fighters? I doubt you could find many of them still around.
 
No, they're inspired by the airframe and operational envelope - looking at carcasses and relics and mothballs and hmm'ing and ahh'ing.
 
Why is the SP so high you don't once appear to describe the actual armor material? The whole thing isn't made of structol, is it? You don't get to use that technology and alleged redundancy to justify a heavy fighter's SP.

Why is it using/mentioning Winter II systems? Can you eliminate other copypasta as well?

Can you move the descriptions below the stats, once they're all ready?

Your Apparition Wake Array has broken links in it; please repair those first.
 
The submitter has three days to address this submission, or it will be rejected for IC usage. This submission also is subject to prejudice, as the submitter has left it alone before for long periods of time.

A submission rejected with prejudice cannot be revived.
 
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