tomaszavenger
Inactive Member
Aendri said:Around a bit more than I thought I would be so here we go.
Male-female is all sorts of skewed, because of the races. Nekos on the whole will almost always be female, so they skew it, but it's pretty close to 50-50 would be my bet, in terms of PC characters. Each of the nations has a male to female ratio for NPC numbers somewhere though, if I remember right.
On to the character though.
Is that your art? Unless you can show artists permission or it happens to be yours (in which case you might be able to get a few commissions, it looks pretty decent), you can't use it.
I edited in a link to a page under your name. Just click the red link, follow it, and create a user page. You can look at other members for an example, but it doesn't have to be anything special.
IF you would, please go through and include standard English measurements, in addition to metric. A lot of people on here don't know metric.
Description is... Well I'm going to leave the mechanical stuff for Moonie, because I'm not too sure on whether that works or not. Same for the age. I think that a government created ID-SOL would be younger than that, but I'll leave it up to Moonie. He might want to hear you out on it.
In personality, it would be "he is fascinated by", not "he is fascinating by".
Not a change, just a note, but I want to see this dude meet Asher. It would be amusing.
You need to add on the boilerplate skills. They're just down a bit further on the skill page.
You can replace most of your inventory with url=https://wiki.stararmy.com/doku.php?id=nepleslia:standard_issue_equipment]this page's stuff[/url], that's just the standard inventory.
Finally, just a couple spelling mistakes (need to replace a few she's with he's, that kind of stuff), and you need to switch his total cash to 6000 DA. You're a Neppie, so you get DA instead of KS.
Just post back in here when you have any questions or finish those edits. Great start though.
Aendri said:Tomas, it's not a matter of what you know, it's a matter of what most of us know. And I'm one of the few on here who has probably had much experience switching on the fly, so we ask that you include either english measurements or both. If nothing else, it's a lot simpler for you, one person, to use a converter and add in the other version than for everyone else on the site to look it up and convert it anytime they need it.
Boilerplates are here. They're the standard skills every soldier in the DION is required to have.
Aendri said:Still need your user page completed, and we're waiting on Moonie. I'll poke one of the others too, just to get it checked for content. You might have to go with the Acadia or 4th though, since I think MoonMan is sketchy right now.
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